09-30-2011, 10:33 AM
an absolute wowser,
i though i was i for an Orville and Wright moment but none of it.
the 1st verse really sucked me in, the 2nd lapped my face and said wake up stupid, we're talking about the real world here.
the 3rd, was more genteel, it was full of happenings, and the last was quite poignant, i loved the last line as though he was making a final mark, that "period" the ends the play, or poem or chapter.
if i had a nit it would be the two dreams, could one be changed? jmo
thanks for the read sid, this is my fave of yours so far.
i though i was i for an Orville and Wright moment but none of it.
the 1st verse really sucked me in, the 2nd lapped my face and said wake up stupid, we're talking about the real world here.
the 3rd, was more genteel, it was full of happenings, and the last was quite poignant, i loved the last line as though he was making a final mark, that "period" the ends the play, or poem or chapter.
if i had a nit it would be the two dreams, could one be changed? jmo
thanks for the read sid, this is my fave of yours so far.