If All The Birds Fall From The Sky

[billy]

it reminds me of a famous "IF" poem by someone else, though only in the "if's"

for me the poem (it's message) could be better promoted without the 'ifs'
i think it would have a hell of a lot more power as a statement instead of as it is, a question.
some great lines in the poem marc but they feel the least important part of it. all we see is 'if"
the sorrow and anger are lost behind each 'if'
i think it would take a small edit to make this bugger shine, jmho

thanks for the read