09-30-2011, 08:14 AM
The repetition of the first stanza in the end works. Strophe 4 is my fave.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Dole Queue Devotee - by heslopian - 09-30-2011, 01:58 AM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by ICSoria - 09-30-2011, 03:17 AM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by heslopian - 09-30-2011, 04:29 AM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by ICSoria - 09-30-2011, 01:03 PM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by Wildcard - 09-30-2011, 04:52 AM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by heslopian - 09-30-2011, 05:49 AM
RE: Dole Queue Devotee - by Aish - 09-30-2011, 08:14 AM
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