09-30-2011, 07:54 AM
Welcome, Karren.
Overall this piece of writing is quite cliche in subject matter as well as the way it is presented. Try stepping outside your comfort zone and pushing yourself a little, using creative ways to express yourself instead of directly telling your readers.
Happy to have you aboard.
-Aish
Overall this piece of writing is quite cliche in subject matter as well as the way it is presented. Try stepping outside your comfort zone and pushing yourself a little, using creative ways to express yourself instead of directly telling your readers.
Happy to have you aboard.
-Aish
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?