09-29-2011, 08:15 AM
Thanks very much, Rob 
This is an old piece that I hadn't really been able to subject to decent scrutiny, since that doesn't happen much on other sites -- I've fine-tuned more poems here in a couple of months than on a dozen other sites in ten years. One day one of them might even satisfy me!
This is an old piece that I hadn't really been able to subject to decent scrutiny, since that doesn't happen much on other sites -- I've fine-tuned more poems here in a couple of months than on a dozen other sites in ten years. One day one of them might even satisfy me!
It could be worse