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New Moon
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09-28-2011, 11:21 PM
I just love this. I'm unqualified to crit a superior poet, but for what it is worth, I wanted, (when reading it aloud) to read the second each in l-3 as every. I'm not against the artful repeat, but something in me wanted the extra slb or something. The whole of it is wonderful, and your phrasing gave me that "damn, I wish I wrote that" flush a few times. Thanks for a great read.
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RE: New Moon - by only rob - 09-28-2011, 11:21 PM
RE: New Moon - by Leanne - 09-29-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: New Moon - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-30-2011, 03:45 AM
RE: New Moon - by billy - 09-30-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: New Moon - by Todd - 10-01-2011, 03:33 AM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-07-2011, 03:19 PM
RE: New Moon - by billy - 10-07-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-07-2011, 05:00 PM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-08-2011, 04:05 AM
RE: New Moon - by Todd - 10-08-2011, 04:33 AM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-08-2011, 04:46 AM
RE: New Moon - by Todd - 10-08-2011, 06:35 AM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-11-2011, 03:34 AM
RE: New Moon - by addy - 10-11-2011, 01:59 PM
RE: New Moon - by Aish - 10-11-2011, 02:12 PM
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