09-28-2011, 02:32 PM
We all have worshipped a few man gods I think. From Dylan to The Boss... Dempsey to Tyson. I see the green John Deere at work (I've driven a couple) and all the little apples and oranges neatly stacked. Some fine imagery there.
Pauperism may not be a poetic device, but it helps to have been there I think.
I noticed the sty word too (another Aussie!). But sty is used as often these days as stye. I'm just glad you didn't use "hordeolum".
Pauperism may not be a poetic device, but it helps to have been there I think.
I noticed the sty word too (another Aussie!). But sty is used as often these days as stye. I'm just glad you didn't use "hordeolum".