rinsed

[addy]

cautiously
she waited near the gushing reservoir
swiftly
thoughts rush through life
as piqued sunshine paints forging waters
in dullest gray revelations

of what this mundane union had become

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Nice images here, definitely the last three lines shine the brightest. For grammar purposes, I think "wait" in the first line should be the same tense as "paint" in the fifth... you should either have "waits & paints", or "waited & painted". Also just a suggestion, the fourth line could be altered as "thoughts rush to life" or "into life"... I know it alters the meaning somewhat but an alteration might help it be more urgent and evocative. Again this is only a suggestion

Thanks very much for the read