Brother Death

[John Holland]

Hi Billy, I take your point. But it was me being defensive about my style, or lack of it, rather than me saying I am a poetry God. Of course I am here to learn.

I take it your last line was sarcastic? Or is that your style?

"p(P)lease don't take offence, i(I)'m just replying to you're (your) comment."

It doesn't matter really. I get what you say.

thats okay that you feel that way but as the reader in a workshop we say what doesn't work too well for us and what does work well.
i could say, "i don't give a fuck about spelling, i write my way and find if i worry about, it hinders my work " but somehow i wouldn't it would be fair that i'm posting in a workshop.

I seldom worry about syllable counts. I write my way and I find that being overly concerned with syllable counts etc, hinders my work. I assure you all that I can count.

is like saying, fuck you, you can't teach/tell/show me anything. i'm a poetry god. please don't take offence, i'm just replying to you're comment.