And Drift Away:

[Wildcard]

Sleep is a faded blonde --interesting opening line. given that L3 is under heavy meat, I think you should cut L2 or change 'under' to 'by' jmo
weighed down
under heavy meat.
A mastered kiss off dry lips,
an anatomical bike with weary wheels --'weary wheels' is nice. just right. as is the next line.
sleep is a failing logic;
the Schrödinger's cat
of life and death, --Schrödinger's cat was both alive and dead, do you need to explicately say 'life and death'?
writing scripts with invisible inks. --I love this line. just a thought, but do you remember disappearing ink?

   Billy, I love your imagination and creativity. You always have such a practical insanity in your work and I mean that in a good way. This poem is intoxicating to a person like me that loves to sleep. To an insomniac, it might have a very different effect

Thanks for sharing.