Phlegm Poems
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I like this a great deal. Every thought is unique and affecting. It is at once beautiful and complex, making the reader work to unlock the music box. I personally see it as being about a man who is terminally ill, whose philosophical ponderings don't bring back the fact of his imminent death so much as what he says, his phlegm. Just a thought. I could be completely wrong. Either, thanks for the read, only robSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Phlegm Poems - by only rob - 09-23-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Phlegm Poems - by writeitout - 09-23-2011, 10:54 PM
RE: Phlegm Poems - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-24-2011, 12:50 AM
RE: Phlegm Poems - by John Holland - 09-27-2011, 05:18 AM
RE: Phlegm Poems - by heslopian - 09-27-2011, 07:41 PM



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