Bad memories

[heslopian]

Walk away calmly
Stop shouting in my face
More of a man to turn my back
Ignoring your discrace Nice catchy rhyme.

Your ignorance and vulgerness Would "the" work better than "your"? As it is the syntax of this verse seems confused.
Of a person of your status
Tells me your vulcalbury "Vocabulary"
You don't really rate us What does his vocabulary tell you? You seem to leave that thought hanging. How about:

"Your vocabulary proves
you don't really rate us."

So go on - now walk away
Bring your shame with you
Till your dying day
Don't come back for pity
Or sorrow should i say "I"
Your the one that walked out "You're"
I won't forget that day

Thanks for the read, Dublin