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Bad memories
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09-27-2011, 05:25 AM
Your work is raw in my opinion, but it is also strong. I think the reviewers before me have covered most of the things I would have said. So I'll just leave a suggestion for you to consider. I find it helps a lot to read your poem out aloud to yourself. If it doesn't "sound" right, it won't read right. Good luck with your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Bad memories - by DUBLIN5 - 09-24-2011, 03:00 PM
RE: Bad memories - by billy - 09-25-2011, 10:21 AM
RE: Bad memories - by Leanne - 09-25-2011, 04:12 PM
RE: Bad memories - by DUBLIN5 - 09-25-2011, 05:34 PM
RE: Bad memories - by grannyjill - 09-25-2011, 07:43 PM
RE: Bad memories - by Wildcard - 09-25-2011, 11:44 PM
RE: Bad memories - by DUBLIN5 - 09-26-2011, 12:48 AM
RE: Bad memories - by John Holland - 09-27-2011, 05:25 AM
RE: Bad memories - by heslopian - 09-27-2011, 07:28 PM
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