Salome
#9
please. poetry never violates any rules we have.
i got the gist of poem and knew it's references with the silver plate, i was just a little
confused with some of the syntax.
from your post can we presume English is your second language?
if so, maybe we can help with the diction or syntax when you post your poetry.



Reply


Messages In This Thread
Salome - by bogpan - 09-21-2011, 09:06 PM
RE: Salome - by Wildcard - 09-21-2011, 11:46 PM
RE: Salome - by Aish - 09-22-2011, 03:00 AM
RE: Salome - by addy - 09-22-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: Salome - by abu nuwas - 09-23-2011, 09:16 AM
RE: Salome - by billy - 09-25-2011, 10:25 AM
RE: Salome - by Patrick Traveler - 09-25-2011, 12:14 PM
RE: Salome - by bogpan - 09-26-2011, 04:14 PM
RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:27 PM
RE: Salome - by bogpan - 09-26-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:50 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!