Trees

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09-25-2011, 07:52 PM

Hey, this is great! It is weird and commonplace, too - which makes it even more weird. By commonplace I mean the matter of fact way you have written it with no flights of fancy, or fanciful words.

Weird and creepy...yep, that's it.

'conspire' implies that it is with others.Yes? So, 'company' could be jettisoned. How about 'secrecy' to take its place?

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Trees - by Patrick Traveler - 09-25-2011, 12:34 PM

RE: Trees - by Todd - 09-25-2011, 01:04 PM

RE: Trees - by Patrick Traveler - 09-27-2011, 03:25 PM

RE: Trees - by Leanne - 09-25-2011, 04:06 PM

RE: Trees - by grannyjill - 09-25-2011, 07:52 PM

RE: Trees - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 03:54 AM

RE: Trees - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:42 PM

RE: Trees - by John Holland - 09-27-2011, 05:15 AM

RE: Trees - by billy - 09-27-2011, 06:44 PM

RE: Trees - by heslopian - 09-27-2011, 06:53 PM

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