Salome

Salome

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-25-2011, 10:25 AM

i get the gist of the poem bogpan but for me, the syntax feels off,
and so takes a lot away from the read. wish i could have been more helpfull

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Salome - by bogpan - 09-21-2011, 09:06 PM

RE: Salome - by Wildcard - 09-21-2011, 11:46 PM

RE: Salome - by Aish - 09-22-2011, 03:00 AM

RE: Salome - by addy - 09-22-2011, 04:29 PM

RE: Salome - by abu nuwas - 09-23-2011, 09:16 AM

RE: Salome - by billy - 09-25-2011, 10:25 AM

RE: Salome - by Patrick Traveler - 09-25-2011, 12:14 PM

RE: Salome - by bogpan - 09-26-2011, 04:14 PM

RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:27 PM

RE: Salome - by bogpan - 09-26-2011, 04:43 PM

RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:49 PM

RE: Salome - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:50 PM

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