October Poem

[billy]

first off, i think you're worthy of mild or serious feedback
but it's here so here goes. love the first line, it works well with the title.
swirling tea leaves is a great simile and image, i think its a good strong verse. personally i don't think you need the last line, (it would leave it more ambiguous, but not overly so)
for me it needs to have fewer undefinable words such as; longing, souls, jmo

thanks for the read