09-23-2011, 11:26 PM
Welcome! Wow, you leapt in pretty quick!
A very visual clip, with lots of alliteration, and one very sad line, at the end. There are much better critics here than me, so maybe I'll leave it to them.
PS Tried to PM you, but could not.
A very visual clip, with lots of alliteration, and one very sad line, at the end. There are much better critics here than me, so maybe I'll leave it to them.
PS Tried to PM you, but could not.