09-23-2011, 11:11 PM
[2nd draft]
cautiously
she waited near the gushing reservoir
swiftly
thoughts rush through life
as piqued sunshine paints forging waters
in dullest gray revelations
of what this mundane union had become
original
Quote:cautiously
she waited near the gushing reservoir
thoughts rushing through life's tunnel swiftly
as piqued sunshine painted forging waters
in dullest gray revelations
of what this mundane union had become