Memories

Memories

grannyjill Offline

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09-22-2011, 06:39 AM

Thank you Ca - as you are the second person to find the opening lines lacking in some-way, I will certainly do a rewrite of them. It won't affect the nature of the poem, or its structure - so, I will have no problem with this.
This poem came to me almost completely whole, with only the need for minor adjustment...and it is one of my favourites.

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Memories - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 08:13 PM

RE: Memories - by Aish - 09-17-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Memories - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 09:52 PM

RE: Memories - by Aish - 09-18-2011, 03:48 AM

RE: Memories - by grannyjill - 09-18-2011, 04:22 AM

RE: Memories - by Aish - 09-18-2011, 05:54 AM

RE: Memories - by billy - 09-19-2011, 06:03 AM

RE: Memories - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-22-2011, 02:44 AM

RE: Memories - by grannyjill - 09-22-2011, 06:39 AM

RE: Memories - by tigrflye - 09-20-2013, 04:25 AM

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