Salome

[Wildcard]

Hi Bogpan,

Great to see you posting. All suggestions are JMO as a rookie

Did they demand my head - --I think the first line is a nice opener, but maybe if 'Salome' is gonna be your second line it doesn't need to be the title also
Salome?
Is it the price of the sole
Fondness.(?)
Now, when ready is
The Silver Plate --odd grammar here. hard to read.
on it I'll put it by myself
not some blood to fall
on the ground
and some weeds to grow
into your renewed
Fondness.

I like the feel of this as a whole. It brings many elements of the age old story to new life. I loved how it seemed like the blood watered the weeds to spring forth. I must say, from 'The Silver Plate' down, the grammar feels clunky. The whole thing is quite a mouthful . . . maybe it could do with a little more punctuation.

Thanks for sharing.