09-21-2011, 05:29 PM
Hi Moby,
Did she really spell 'their' like that?
Actually, I totally missed that this poem was by Sylvia Plath on my first reading....so, I was viewing it as something you had written. So (despite my being a novice poet) I was looking for areas where the poem might need help.
I found quite a few. I liked her imagery, but the poem was jerky to read, which didn't create a picture of harmony in the sun. Damn. Maybe that was her intention. What do I know?
Thank your for posting
grannyjill
Did she really spell 'their' like that?
Actually, I totally missed that this poem was by Sylvia Plath on my first reading....so, I was viewing it as something you had written. So (despite my being a novice poet) I was looking for areas where the poem might need help.
I found quite a few. I liked her imagery, but the poem was jerky to read, which didn't create a picture of harmony in the sun. Damn. Maybe that was her intention. What do I know?
Thank your for posting
grannyjill