09-20-2011, 05:43 AM
You manage a very difficult balance between the pastoral salt-of-the-earth and the lofty philosopher -- each verse made me smile, then stop and think a little while before moving on to the next. (I know I'm basically evil, but the Deere stanza made me the happiest -- something about rodent slurry that's disgracefully appealing to me 
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In the first verse, is "sty" deliberate (which works as a neat pun) or should it be "stye"? Or do you Americans bugger up yet another perfectly well-spelled word? :p
Really enjoyable, Rob, thanks for the read.
)In the first verse, is "sty" deliberate (which works as a neat pun) or should it be "stye"? Or do you Americans bugger up yet another perfectly well-spelled word? :p
Really enjoyable, Rob, thanks for the read.
It could be worse