feedback!!!

[billy]

Hi, Folks,
Obviously I am new here, and I consider myself a novice poet, so I've been a little hesitant at leaping in with feedback. But, I am trying. I'm like AA...I don't think I am in a position to give advice, so my responses will be in the nature of 'Wow' and maybe even 'How do you do that?'

So, hope that is okay.

bye grannyjill

don't worry, everyone is in a position to feedback and even advice, the poet can use it or leave, and no harms done. if you like it to a wow, just try and say why. i remember you commenting on my "bought and still paying" poem and that was fine.
it's the same if something doesn't work for you, just try and say why.

it' isn't about being good or bad, it's about having some fun while trying to expand as a poet i'm sure everyone would welcome what you have to say feedback wise.