Reflecting on Lost Love

Reflecting on Lost Love

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09-17-2011, 06:02 AM (This post was last modified: 09-17-2011, 06:03 AM by Leanne.)

How about:

I didn't taste forever in that final kiss

and just leave off the next line completely?

PS. You must realise by now that sanity and poetry are mutually exclusive Smile

It could be worse

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Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 04:25 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Leanne - 09-17-2011, 04:59 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 05:12 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Leanne - 09-17-2011, 06:02 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 06:26 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Leanne - 09-17-2011, 06:30 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Wildcard - 09-17-2011, 08:21 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-17-2011, 04:19 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by billy - 09-19-2011, 09:51 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Todd - 09-20-2011, 04:52 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-20-2011, 05:03 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Leanne - 09-21-2011, 12:03 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by Aish - 09-21-2011, 01:29 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-21-2011, 04:46 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by billy - 09-22-2011, 11:32 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by abu nuwas - 09-23-2011, 08:05 AM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by grannyjill - 09-25-2011, 07:32 PM

RE: Reflecting on Lost Love - by billy - 09-26-2011, 04:14 PM

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