Bought and Still Paying:
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(09-16-2011, 05:03 PM)billy Wrote:  The tongue flip-flops.
Swan lake of the flounder family made me laugh and remember some of my former lovers
thrashing between tides
of a course lipped mouth
venal bitch with ass-burger syndrome
bad breathed and greasy,
her dentures dancing in the glass
she worries food, and men
gumming with a toothless crush could you eliminate 'with'? Maybe use a colon after gumming?
"where's the fucking ketchup"
she spits, and i walk out.
the title says it all. Who hasn't felt like that?
I love 'ass-burger' syndrome. I'm growing fond of the occasional invented word, thanks to reading some fine poets on this forum I stumbled across . . .
Nice work, Billy.
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Messages In This Thread
Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-16-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Wildcard - 09-16-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Todd - 09-16-2011, 10:52 PM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-17-2011, 06:48 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Aish - 09-18-2011, 12:31 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by grannyjill - 09-18-2011, 02:52 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-19-2011, 10:12 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 04:18 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-26-2011, 05:08 PM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-27-2011, 06:25 AM
RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-27-2011, 11:31 AM



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