09-16-2011, 08:43 PM
(09-16-2011, 05:03 PM)billy Wrote: The tongue flip-flops.the title says it all. Who hasn't felt like that?
Swan lake of the flounder family made me laugh and remember some of my former lovers
thrashing between tides
of a course lipped mouth
venal bitch with ass-burger syndrome
bad breathed and greasy,
her dentures dancing in the glass
she worries food, and men
gumming with a toothless crush could you eliminate 'with'? Maybe use a colon after gumming?
"where's the fucking ketchup"
she spits, and i walk out.
I love 'ass-burger' syndrome. I'm growing fond of the occasional invented word, thanks to reading some fine poets on this forum I stumbled across . . .
Nice work, Billy.

