Bought and Still Paying:

Bought and Still Paying:

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09-16-2011, 05:03 PM (This post was last modified: 09-26-2011, 05:06 PM by billy.)

The tongue flip-flops.
Swan lake of the flounder family
thrashing between tides
of a coarse lipped mouth
venal bitch with ass-burger syndrome
bad-breathed and greasy,
her dentures dance in the glass
she worries food, and men
gums it; a toothless crush.
"Where's the fucking ketchup"
she spits, as I walk out.

a small edit based on feedback from Todd, Ca ne fait rienand AA Smile

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Messages In This Thread

Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-16-2011, 05:03 PM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Wildcard - 09-16-2011, 08:43 PM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Todd - 09-16-2011, 10:52 PM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-17-2011, 06:48 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Aish - 09-18-2011, 12:31 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by grannyjill - 09-18-2011, 02:52 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-19-2011, 10:12 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 04:18 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-26-2011, 05:08 PM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-27-2011, 06:25 AM

RE: Bought and Still Paying: - by billy - 09-27-2011, 11:31 AM

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