Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content)

[LaGitana]

I loved this from a train wreck point of view... yes the shock and awe that they refer to from above... nothing like making a statement! However, and it may just be me, but I was looking for just a bit something more. Like your " 'orrible" and "mum" tone... it seems that there should be a bit more of that laced through out. Those stand out like a vivid goose to the ass, but should you also have a honk to the chesters as well?

I think you've addressed the relative grammar, etc. issues already from the more sensible critics....

I'll say WELL DONE!