Devoured

Devoured

Aish

Raven Queen

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09-15-2011, 05:09 PM

Thank you for all the information.

In my mind, the first two lines were the mating ritual.
I guess I need to be more visceral Smile

I updated it.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Devoured - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 03:54 PM

RE: Devoured - by billy - 09-15-2011, 04:22 PM

RE: Devoured - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 04:25 PM

RE: Devoured - by billy - 09-15-2011, 05:00 PM

RE: Devoured - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 05:09 PM

RE: Devoured - by billy - 09-15-2011, 05:21 PM

RE: Devoured - by LaGitana - 09-15-2011, 11:48 PM

RE: Devoured - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 02:11 AM

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