09-15-2011, 05:04 PM
yes. rain is a part of nature as is food.
plus, the modern haiku is allowed to use modern images.
i could have wrote;
Wimbledon fortnight
eating cream and strawberries-
rain stops play
which would be more compact and change the cutting line.
plus, the modern haiku is allowed to use modern images.
i could have wrote;
Wimbledon fortnight
eating cream and strawberries-
rain stops play
which would be more compact and change the cutting line.