09-14-2011, 09:54 PM
Thanks for the kind words and feedback, AA
I wrote the second verse first, which is probably why it seems like the better to start with.
I used "of" instead of "with" to suggest that the quirks I describe comprise who she is in my eyes.

I wrote the second verse first, which is probably why it seems like the better to start with.
I used "of" instead of "with" to suggest that the quirks I describe comprise who she is in my eyes.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

