09-14-2011, 05:43 AM
Aish, you're more than welcome, i love your prattle 
AA. thanks for the reply. the context of the poem is held in it's title;
The last part (if I am understanding it correctly) feels very sad to me. Like he has forgotten where he came from; (a good assessment)
Jack; thanks for the kind words
i'll have a mull over the comma's
Peter, welcome to the fold, it really is great to see you try your hand at giving feedback
i'll take a good look at the line you mention when i do an edit and see if i can improve what i was trying to say.
thanks to everyone for taking thier time to read and comment
AA. thanks for the reply. the context of the poem is held in it's title;
The last part (if I am understanding it correctly) feels very sad to me. Like he has forgotten where he came from; (a good assessment)
Jack; thanks for the kind words
i'll have a mull over the comma's Peter, welcome to the fold, it really is great to see you try your hand at giving feedback
i'll take a good look at the line you mention when i do an edit and see if i can improve what i was trying to say.
thanks to everyone for taking thier time to read and comment