09-13-2011, 10:19 AM
I rather like that idea Addy. The poem could easily start from that point... I'll definitely have a serious think about it, thanks. I think the problem is that the opening lines are very action based, whereas what follows it is more internal.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe