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Smells Like Her Kind
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09-11-2011, 09:02 PM
I really like this Jack. The title is great. I have seen sexton be that grim scout badge you mention. I only have one issue. The beginning of L7 feels like it needs a the or a her added to read smoothly.
Enjoyed the read. Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Smells Like Her Kind - by heslopian - 09-11-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Smells Like Her Kind - by Todd - 09-11-2011, 09:02 PM
RE: Smells Like Her Kind - by heslopian - 09-12-2011, 12:12 AM
RE: Smells Like Her Kind - by Aish - 09-13-2011, 02:20 PM
RE: Smells Like Her Kind - by addy - 09-13-2011, 03:02 PM
RE: Smells Like Her Kind - by heslopian - 09-13-2011, 08:09 PM
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