09-11-2011, 02:06 AM
And there is so much left unsaid, sight unseen but still a loaded piece set to go off with a bang.
I love the imagery of the tripods... So much can be read into that, or it can be taken for what it is.
It might just be me and they way that I am reading this but moving from L10 to L11 is not moving me along with it. It is almost as if I have blinked at the end of L10 and then upon opening them, there appears L11... Maybe that is your intention though as it can change in the blink of an eye and be over in so many ways in the porn industry.
Just some food for thought. I know its not the usual critique you get from the others... (Also, is rub on hyphenated?)
I love the imagery of the tripods... So much can be read into that, or it can be taken for what it is.
It might just be me and they way that I am reading this but moving from L10 to L11 is not moving me along with it. It is almost as if I have blinked at the end of L10 and then upon opening them, there appears L11... Maybe that is your intention though as it can change in the blink of an eye and be over in so many ways in the porn industry.
Just some food for thought. I know its not the usual critique you get from the others... (Also, is rub on hyphenated?)
Do you realise that memories are like a bag of wooden nickels... Or a field full of men on wooden legs in a flash flood... useless ~ D.A.