09-10-2011, 07:07 AM
Granny I'm guessing you kinda like this Fry guy :p I liked your ode to the 'Ode' writer. My sincere thanks for your compliments and for taking time to read this.
Todd, your advice is always sound, it seems. The puncuation problem will need some time, but I think 'faintly saw' is great for what I'm trying to do. (I'm assuming stumble-played was not a typo) I'm fond of it, but I need to step away and come back after a few more of these damned enjambment exercizes.
Todd, your advice is always sound, it seems. The puncuation problem will need some time, but I think 'faintly saw' is great for what I'm trying to do. (I'm assuming stumble-played was not a typo) I'm fond of it, but I need to step away and come back after a few more of these damned enjambment exercizes.