09-09-2011, 03:01 PM
Billy, thank you -- this is quite an old poem of mine, written for a long-ago friend, and I thought I'd trot it out again and see what needed to be done. I'm pleased that it doesn't seem to need that background knowledge to work.
AA, yes, it's the fingers fleeing -- and there is no nobler purpose for poetry than to get you laid, so good luck with it
AA, yes, it's the fingers fleeing -- and there is no nobler purpose for poetry than to get you laid, so good luck with it
It could be worse