09-09-2011, 11:22 AM
The first two stanza's look heavy metal rage like,
the third like a whine and the last somewhere in between.
I would love to see you stick to the same mood as the first two,
I think you have something there.
Please don't take anything I said as negative, because it is not meant to be, however I am a straight forward person and I value truth over feelings.
You are not alone not understanding all the diff styles and stuff, I am new to all of this myself and have been reading a bit but have trouble understanding what I am reading.
Welcome to the forum.
the third like a whine and the last somewhere in between.
I would love to see you stick to the same mood as the first two,
I think you have something there.
Please don't take anything I said as negative, because it is not meant to be, however I am a straight forward person and I value truth over feelings.
You are not alone not understanding all the diff styles and stuff, I am new to all of this myself and have been reading a bit but have trouble understanding what I am reading.
Welcome to the forum.