Awakening

Awakening

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09-08-2011, 06:22 AM

Todd, Billy, Addy,
Thank you for the many great suggestions. I have incorporated some of them in my latest revision. I'm not sure the new ending works and would be interested in additional feedback. I think the poem is getting tighter in many spots. I hope I didn't overdo the revisions.
pete

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Awakening - by peter6 - 09-06-2011, 10:04 PM

RE: Awakening - by Todd - 09-07-2011, 01:19 AM

RE: Awakening - by peter6 - 09-07-2011, 05:47 AM

RE: Awakening - by Todd - 09-07-2011, 06:16 AM

RE: Awakening - by billy - 09-07-2011, 03:19 PM

RE: Awakening - by addy - 09-07-2011, 04:41 PM

RE: Awakening - by peter6 - 09-08-2011, 06:22 AM

RE: Awakening - by Todd - 09-08-2011, 06:41 AM

RE: Awakening - by Wildcard - 09-08-2011, 07:17 AM

RE: Awakening - by peter6 - 09-08-2011, 09:15 PM

RE: Awakening - by grannyjill - 09-08-2011, 09:44 PM

RE: Awakening - by Todd - 09-08-2011, 11:04 PM

RE: Awakening - by peter6 - 09-10-2011, 02:25 AM

RE: Awakening - by heslopian - 09-12-2011, 11:56 PM

RE: Awakening - by LaGitana - 09-13-2011, 03:19 AM

RE: Awakening - by peter6 - 09-13-2011, 10:57 AM

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