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Finale
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09-07-2011, 11:15 AM
Quote:Entered darkness like a bus, That's my favorite line in the poem. It's very gripping from beginning to end. No critiques, but a question: When a poem doesn't rhyme, why do you break it up into small parts instead of just writing paragraphs? Am I missing something? |
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RE: Finale - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 08:20 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 08:24 AM
RE: Finale - by addy - 09-07-2011, 10:19 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 10:52 AM
RE: Finale - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 11:15 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: Finale - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 12:28 PM
RE: Finale - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 12:50 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:12 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:35 PM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 04:55 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 05:44 PM
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