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Finale
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09-07-2011, 10:19 AM
I love how you used the dropping lines... they perfectly complement the shifting imagery in your poem. Your spaces and transitions were just as gorgeous as the images themselves, and those final lines killed me (as did practically every line). I think you nailed this one Jack.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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RE: Finale - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 08:20 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 08:24 AM
RE: Finale - by addy - 09-07-2011, 10:19 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 10:52 AM
RE: Finale - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 11:15 AM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: Finale - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 12:28 PM
RE: Finale - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 12:50 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:12 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:35 PM
RE: Finale - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 04:55 PM
RE: Finale - by billy - 09-07-2011, 05:44 PM
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