09-07-2011, 08:30 AM
The metapoem can't deny it's a metapoem without becoming a hypermetapoem you know 
Love that last line especially. Although the first stanza is pretty damn poignant, and I'd quite like to see a different poem built around that.
Love that last line especially. Although the first stanza is pretty damn poignant, and I'd quite like to see a different poem built around that.
It could be worse