Dark Obsession

Dark Obsession

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-06-2011, 09:07 AM (This post was last modified: 09-06-2011, 09:08 AM by billy.)

in that case you could (and this is only a suggestion) use;

she spiral drifts
skyward bravely,
so soon, she's gone from me again.

which work in well with all the other s sounds.

hope it helps

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Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 01:24 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by billy - 09-05-2011, 05:53 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by heslopian - 09-05-2011, 05:57 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by Todd - 09-05-2011, 07:03 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by Leanne - 09-05-2011, 08:43 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 10:54 PM

RE: Dark Obesession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 08:29 AM

RE: Dark Obesession - by Leanne - 09-06-2011, 05:07 AM

2nd Try - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 07:04 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 08:45 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Todd - 09-06-2011, 08:59 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 09:03 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 09:07 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 09:18 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Erthona - 01-13-2012, 05:08 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by ckeo - 09-09-2011, 11:22 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-09-2011, 01:23 PM

RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-09-2011, 03:17 PM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-06-2012, 07:08 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-13-2012, 08:38 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Philatone - 01-13-2012, 09:46 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Erthona - 01-13-2012, 10:31 AM

RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-13-2012, 12:15 PM

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