Dark Obsession

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Revision 3

Daughter of lust claim me.
I expire in you
and breathe in your cloud
of jet black pain

Pressing me down into a hole,
shovel in hand--
I dig you
down.

Not drowning, worshiping the water I inhale . . .
I inhale you
and exhale all of me,
but still you leave me
weaker than before.

2nd Revision

daughter of lust,
claiming me now,
shrouding my eyes in misery.

pressing me down,
soon I will fall,
'neath all the pain she gives to me.

yearning to touch, I
worship the taste,
once more I long to hold her in.

in spirals she's drifting,
skyward bravely,
so soon, she's gone from me again.

Original

Dark obsession
claiming my all,
cover my eyes with misery.

Pressing me down,
soon I will fall,
'neath all the pain it gives to me.

Her name I scream,
the touch I crave,
once more I long to hold it in.

Spirals floating,
upward bravely,
so soon, she's gone from me again.

take it easy on a newbie, huh? ;-)