09-05-2011, 01:24 AM
Revision 3
Daughter of lust claim me.
I expire in you
and breathe in your cloud
of jet black pain
Pressing me down into a hole,
shovel in hand--
I dig you
down.
Not drowning, worshiping the water I inhale . . .
I inhale you
and exhale all of me,
but still you leave me
weaker than before.
take it easy on a newbie, huh? ;-)
Daughter of lust claim me.
I expire in you
and breathe in your cloud
of jet black pain
Pressing me down into a hole,
shovel in hand--
I dig you
down.
Not drowning, worshiping the water I inhale . . .
I inhale you
and exhale all of me,
but still you leave me
weaker than before.
Quote:2nd Revision
daughter of lust,
claiming me now,
shrouding my eyes in misery.
pressing me down,
soon I will fall,
'neath all the pain she gives to me.
yearning to touch, I
worship the taste,
once more I long to hold her in.
in spirals she's drifting,
skyward bravely,
so soon, she's gone from me again.
Quote:Original
Dark obsession
claiming my all,
cover my eyes with misery.
Pressing me down,
soon I will fall,
'neath all the pain it gives to me.
Her name I scream,
the touch I crave,
once more I long to hold it in.
Spirals floating,
upward bravely,
so soon, she's gone from me again.
take it easy on a newbie, huh? ;-)

