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09-04-2011, 10:13 AM
I see what you mean, "we're through" doesn't need repeating, but I think it lends a more haunted atmosphere. Like an echo in a corridor. I'll get rid of "again" in a mo. Thanks for the feedback Billy
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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