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[billy]

If they'd pulled her from the stove
she would have been a vegetable, i love this line
drooling at the love gifts made
by poor Hughes and her mother.
I imagine Sylvia able to form
but one phrase, over and over again: Is again needed
"we're through, we're through..."

i really like this,
if i had a nit it would be the 2nd 'we're through'
in the line above it you say over and over again.
then you show it. twice.

it didn't really spoil anything in the poem but i'm just wondering what you think?

a great little write that sad yet makes me smile

thanks for the read