09-04-2011, 09:30 AM
Yes, but a roast vegetable 
I would like to see just "Sylvia" rather than "Sylvia Plath" in L5 -- after all, it's pretty obvious who this is about, and Sylvia sounds more intimate, especially since you call Ted "Hughes".
The last line is great -- the "we" could refer to Sylvia and Ted, or Sylvia and her mother, or Sylvia and life itself (or even just Sylvia and the oven
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Nice bit of musing, Jack.
I would like to see just "Sylvia" rather than "Sylvia Plath" in L5 -- after all, it's pretty obvious who this is about, and Sylvia sounds more intimate, especially since you call Ted "Hughes".
The last line is great -- the "we" could refer to Sylvia and Ted, or Sylvia and her mother, or Sylvia and life itself (or even just Sylvia and the oven
)Nice bit of musing, Jack.
It could be worse