Blindness, a haiku
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Thanks for the kind words and feedback, BilboSmile
Stupidity? I'm not sure I know what you mean. How is the blindness in the poem a trait of stupidity?
I guess it is more of a senryu though as it's just as much about expressing an idea than an image.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 09:25 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by billy - 09-02-2011, 09:33 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by billy - 09-02-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by addy - 09-02-2011, 10:43 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 10:52 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 12:36 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 03:44 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 02:17 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 02:35 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 03:21 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 03:31 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 03:46 AM



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