Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content)

Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content)

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08-27-2011, 09:03 AM

i must have been having an (i forgot his name) moment, ee cum i think Big Grin

i'll sort the I out; i did it in note book and it doesn't pick up on spelling mistakes and bad grammar Sad

so thanks for that.
i can use stalks it is better.

i could change the earwig instances over (which i'll have a think about) but i don't really want to put one of them as
the beginning of a verse as it not the wild flower rep thing out of kilter. i'll implement the rest of your suggestions some time today
thanks for taking the time to read and critique Todd.

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Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by billy - 08-26-2011, 02:22 PM

RE: Wild flowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by Todd - 08-27-2011, 06:38 AM

RE: Wild flowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by billy - 08-27-2011, 09:03 AM

RE: Wild flowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by ICSoria - 08-31-2011, 11:45 AM

RE: Wild flowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by billy - 09-02-2011, 05:38 AM

RE: Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by Wildcard - 09-08-2011, 08:04 AM

RE: Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by billy - 09-14-2011, 06:03 AM

RE: Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by LaGitana - 09-16-2011, 12:01 AM

RE: Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 01:59 PM

RE: Wildflowers line up in the meadow: (content) - by billy - 09-16-2011, 04:28 PM

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