Kristallnacht

Kristallnacht

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08-24-2011, 12:38 PM

i'm not sure about concusses. I'm not fond of the word as you have it here and unlike the one word line nouns to me at least it doesn't feel strong enough to hold the line alone. It could just be my bias of course.

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Kristallnacht - by Aish - 08-23-2011, 05:39 PM

RE: Kristallnacht - by Todd - 08-23-2011, 11:30 PM

RE: Kristallnacht - by abu nuwas - 08-24-2011, 04:23 AM

RE: Kristallnacht - by Aish - 08-24-2011, 05:39 AM

RE: Kristallnacht - by Todd - 08-24-2011, 05:56 AM

RE: Kristallnacht - by abu nuwas - 08-24-2011, 06:34 AM

RE: Kristallnacht - by billy - 08-24-2011, 11:54 AM

RE: Kristallnacht - by Todd - 08-24-2011, 12:38 PM

RE: Kristallnacht - by Todd - 08-24-2011, 11:41 PM

RE: Kristallnacht - by heslopian - 08-25-2011, 12:03 AM

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